Tag: Writing

Holiday Recount – (biking up bluespere)

I stopped to catch my breath, I was almost at the top of the hill so I powered on. Finally I got to the top of the hill and had a drink of water. Next I went down a track called bad boys. I went down a dip and had to lean back and pedal hard. The corners were fun.

 

 After that I tried a track that I hadn’t done before and went down the steep slope I pick up speed and zoomed up the other side but didn’t see the the corner so when i got to the corner I kept going forwards so I slammed on the brakes but my front wheel was hanging over the side of the cliff it gave me a fright but I was fine. The rest of the track was fun though. Next I rode back along the road. I went really fast. At the bottom I felt happy and tired. I slept well that night.

 

I liked biking the tracks  

Quick Write

What is a food you find really disgusting? Explain why it’s so bad

I find Picicles Disgusting because they are prickly and taste sour. They look scary, and are weird because they are rip off cucumbers. But cucumbers are better 🙂 I think pickles are weird!!!!! Or maybe I’m weird????? 

Do you think pickles are rip off cucumbers??? 

Buller West Coast Champs

I walked into the pool and Esra’s farted and toxic gasses flew everywhere, it stunk the pool out. Later I had to go to marshalling to swim. Waiting to go out behind the blocks took forever, finally it was time out, I jumped on the block. The cold water felt nice and cold. Kicked hard and did a fast turn, I could see someone just beside me so I pushed harder. In the end I beat the person beside me by a few meters. I felt happy and tired. 

Do you like swiming???

Quick Write

You work at the zoo and the elephants break lose what do you do.

 I would run to a underground bunker but the elephants make the lions go mad and they break lose they chase after me and corner  me in but then an army of monkeys with nerf guns shoot the lions butts then the lions played dead. Then the pest control take the elephants, and the lions away with the monkeys sleeping on top of them, then I feel something hit my head so i look behind myself and see a monkey with a coconut running away!!!  

Quick Write

You climb to the top of the tallest tree in your neighbourhood. What can you see that you couldn’t see from down below?

If I could jump to the top of the tallest building I could see my house and the docs with boats cramped inside, I could see a man falling from a skyscraper using his top as a parachute, I saw a old lady chasing a bus with a nerf gun riding a motorbike. I saw that the lake was on fire and and a flying squirrel chasing a jet plane! I don’t know if it was myself or I need to go to the doctors to get my eyes checked!!!!!

Quick Write

I would climb a coconut tree and grab a coconut and split it on a rock, drink the water out. I would then grab the ferns from the tree and sticks and build a shelter 

And put dried leafs over myself to stay warm and try to lite a fire to keep bugs away. 

In the morning i would try to get a plane bye writing SOS in the sand.

Quick Write

If you could invent anything, what would it be?

If I could invent anything I would invent a massive plate and when you put food on it grew super size and if it was a banana it would peel it for you because two big arms came out over the side of the plate and would peel it for you. The plate would also has a knife that comes out and chops it up and you can choose all this by just pressing a few buttons.   

Quick Write Week- 4

You can choose one new subject or sport to be taught at school. What do you choose and why?

I would choose surfing and boogie boarding because it’s fun being in the water and speeding on a wave and you feel like you’re flying in space yelling “WEEEEEEEEE”. I like crashing into my sister laughing until your head falls off!!! It would be lots of fun to have surfing as a subject at school!  🙂

That’s why I would like to have surfing at school!!!!


https://www.surf-forecast.com/breaks/Cobden-Beach/forecasts/latest/six_day

Writing

Piwakawaka has been writing and learning how to start a story and quickly hook your reader into wanting to read more. Miss Hickford told us to try start a story with someone talking and not to forget to put” at the start and end of the speech. I think its a lot easer to start a story using speech.