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Lighting burst down around Bob as he walked towards the bank. The building was heavily guarded, security cameras surrounded the building. Just as Bob was about to enter, a big gust of wind swept him off his feet. The wind twirled him around as he spun up to the clouds like steam rising from a boiling jug. Bob smashed into debris, a car horn beeped and bricks flew around like meteors. All at the same time Bob stayed airborne, dizzy and confused.
As soon as the wind appeared it disappeared, and Bob found himself laying in the rubble looking at the grey sky surrounding him and the building towering above him. But magically he was alive, apart from some grazes and cuts.







